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wildflower's avatar

That felt smooth and soothing. Thank you!!

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Dusk Daughter's avatar

Thank you Wildflower. Thank you for spending time with my words. X

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wildflower's avatar

Your poem was just what I needed this morning.

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Dusk Daughter's avatar

That leaves me warm and happy. 💕🥰

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wildflower's avatar

🤍🤍🤍

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Rachel Kelly's avatar

In the end the only permission we need comes from within. I am always in awe of you, softest steel I know, and the most thunderous silence.

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Dusk Daughter's avatar

Love love. X

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Libertarian's avatar

Sweet and tender poem. Thank-you for sharing your talent.

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Dusk Daughter's avatar

Thank you also my friend. x

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pen n. bolsillo's avatar

thank you. i needed this. the line in the sand the width of an atom… god i love that.

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Paul John Dear's avatar

And yet in that atom width is a whole universe we can get lost in. Stay or go could be a whole lifetime. You got me pondering with this one. 🙏

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Emma Steel's avatar

You are absolutely right, the choices are made every day, without recognition, without fanfare, but they become more obvious as circumstances get harsher.

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